原标题:"反模板":真 ? 20考研英语作文打卡第三季(29)

新的一季打卡闪亮上台。在这一季打卡中,同学们需要用英语简略描绘指定图像或图表。没错,就是写作实战。假定你细心操练了前两季打卡,造句才能大约有显着前进。所以把你们的作用体如今这一季打卡中吧。

★不要故意仿照写作宝典中的版别。

四六级出分了,不管成果如何,都是曩昔的作业,那么全力温习考研吧。

上一期打卡内容

与其只概需求,不如做个榜样

写作宝典版别:

the two pictures contrast two scenarios about child education. in the left one, a father is watching tv while urging his son, who is trying to peek at the screen, to concentrate on the homework. in the right one, on the other hand, a father and his son are sitting at their own tables, doing their own work until midnight. obviously, the author is trying to tell us the importance of role models in children’s growth.

来自学生的留言

1. 初度呈现的人物用必定身份,不必想对身份。将father改为middle-aged man

2. 你可以说“舒畅得”坐在沙发上/躺在床上,但不可以以说“舒畅地”看电视。

3. “尽力学习”是study hard,不是hard study

4. 假定标明“对或人大喊并期望对方做某事”,用shout for someone to do something

5. appeal to表“招引时”都是用主动语态,something appeals to someone

假定用人做主语,用be attracted by …

when这有些表述比照繁琐,可简化为his son gets distracted by the ongoing program

6. in the second drawing前置会好一些:on the contrary, in the second drawing, …

1. 第一句for改为to

2. with his son doing homework这有些没有疑问,可是couldn’t help …作为谓语成分,不能放在这样的方位。处置方案是将描绘孩子的有些化作从句:a man is watching tv, while his son is doing homework but could not hel
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p get distracted from the ongoing program.

3. 第二张图和第一张图是同一对父子,因而a man改为the man

4. does themselves’ homework改为are doing their own stuffs

5. 第三句和首句意思根柢重复,删去即可。

1. most of the parents改为most parents

2. just as这一句。删去just,因为just as x, y是一个特别句型,意思是“就像…, …也…”

* 然后,a boy is reluctant to do his homework和his father is watching tv并不构成比照联络。构成比照联络的是“看电视的父亲敦促孩子好好学习”和“孩子扭头偷看电视”。

3. 下一句的the boy is motivated归于“估测内容”,不是图像本身的信息,最佳不要这么写。包括下一句see, that is …也是估测信息。这些可放在中心段分析时来写。

今日打卡使命

俄然起来的使用文写作应战,加油。

directions:

imagine that you are an english major who will soon graduate. write a letter about 100 words to an international middle school to apply for a job. you should include any details which you think are necessary.

do not use your own name in the letter. use “li ming” instead.

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